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發表於 2012-5-13 05:05 PM 資料文集短消息

english writing problem

well, i am writing an article about a people you think you can learn from.

and i wrote her in the outline[worksheet]
http://myanimelist.net/character/10369/Chihaya_Kisaragi

and the teacher ticked it,means i can write about her.

so, i am thinking should i write her or write something else

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發表於 2012-5-13 05:08 PM 資料文集短消息

QUOTE:

原帖由 orz1515 於 2012-5-13 05:05 PM 發表。

well, i am writing an article about a people you think you can learn from.
and i wrote her in the outline[worksheet]
http://myanimelist.net/character/10369/Chihaya_Kisaragi

and the teacher ticked it,means i can write about her.

so, i am thinking should i write her or write something else

Where is the fxxking subject?

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