english writing problem

well, i am writing an article about a people you think you can learn from.:clown:
and i wrote her in the outline[worksheet]
[url]http://myanimelist.net/character/10369/Chihaya_Kisaragi[/url]

and the teacher ticked it,means i can write about her.:em41:

so, i am thinking should i write her or write something else:em35:

[quote][b]原帖由 [i]orz1515[/i] 於 2012-5-13 05:05 PM 發表。 [/b][url=http://www.forum.eyankit.com/viewthread.php?tid=84875&page=1#pid932706][img]http://www.forum.eyankit.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
well, i am writing an article about a people you think you can learn from.
and i wrote her in the outline[worksheet]
[url]http://myanimelist.net/character/10369/Chihaya_Kisaragi[/url]

and the teacher ticked it,[color=Red]means i can write about her[/color].

so, i am thinking should i write her or write something else[/quote]

Where is the fxxking subject?:clown:

回覆 #2 keith_keith 的帖子

shut up:clown:

[quote][b]原帖由 [i]orz1515[/i] 於 2012-5-13 05:05 PM 發表。 [/b][url=http://forum.eyankit.com/viewthread.php?tid=84875&page=1#pid932706][img]http://forum.eyankit.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
well, i am writing an article about [color=Red]a people[/color] you think you can learn from.:clown:
and i wrote her in the outline
[url]http://myanimelist.net/character/10369/Chihaya_Kisaragi[/url]

and the teacher ticke ... [/quote]
a person (好似係)

小弟英文不才 :em35:

[quote][b]原帖由 [i]orz1515[/i] 於 2012-5-13 05:05 PM 發表。 [/b][url=http://forum.eyankit.com/viewthread.php?tid=84875&page=1#pid932706][img]http://forum.eyankit.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
well, i am writing an article about [color=black]a [/color][color=red]person[/color] you think you can learn from.:clown:
and i wrote her in the outline
[url=http://myanimelist.net/character/10369/Chihaya_Kisaragi]http://myanimelist.net/character/10369/Chihaya_Kisaragi[/url]

and the teacher ticke ... [/quote]

[size=6][color=red]FAILED[/color][/size]