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2007-9-28 05:39 PM `傻SIU欣;-
[極力推介]我鍾意你?傻氣+可愛?

人物介紹:

敏~可愛...傻氣...超多男仔鍾意佢...不過└俊┘開頭就話佢白痴...扮可愛...後尾............

琳~敏既好朋友...人緣好...鍾意耀..

澄~同佢地都係好朋友...好fd...鍾意風...

俊~靚仔一個...為人爆cool...但係好專一

風~靚仔...口花花..鍾意撩女仔...超多女...

耀~靚仔...隨和...好nice..超多女鍾意

暫時咁多...人物會陸續加....
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敏:澄澄...琳琳~你地得未呀?

敏,琳,澄3個一齊住...因為佢地既呀爸呀媽係合作夥伴...所以佢地超fd...

佢地既daddy,mummy成日出chip..冇咩時間理佢地...

澄:未呀...死人凌海琳同我爭次厠呀...

敏:你地一齊用唔得架咩?

澄+琳:唔得...

敏真係冇佢地乎...佢地日日都嗌交,...但係轉個頭又攬頭攬頸...

敏:我唔等你地架啦....

呢句說話一出...佢地就9秒9既速度搞掂晒所有野...

番到學校喇....

敏:新一年新開始....

澄:55...唔知我地3個係咪一班呢?

敏:你想同風一班炸掛?

講中晒...冇聲出....

琳琳係到大叫....

敏:你嗌咩呀?

琳:好野...我同耀一班呀....不過都同你地一班...

敏:兩個都重色軾友..唉...好失望囉.....

澄+琳:你第時有左鍾意既人...就會好似我地咁架啦....

敏:第時先算啦

上到班房..佢地兩個飛起敏...唔同敏坐...兩個一齊坐

之後就有一個超靚仔既人坐左係敏隔離...

不過佢個樣超cool...又串..一d都唔nice

2007-9-28 05:40 PM `傻SIU欣;-
CH.2 你個乞人憎下


敏覺得好奇怪...點解佢度度唔坐...偏偏坐係敏隔離...

呢個時候,坐係敏前面既澄澄同琳琳就話啦...

澄+琳:你隔離咪有個靚仔LO..好好同人地溝通啦...

唔知係咪比個男仔聽到...

男:想溝我呀?照下鏡先啦....

敏梗係嬲架啦...

敏:邊個話溝你...你唔好咁自大啦...

男:係咩?哦...你話係咪係囉...

敏:咩我話係就係呀...而係我咩都冇講過...

男;至憎呢D係到扮可愛既女仔

敏:你洗唔洗鬧得咁過份....你個乞人憎...

眼淺既敏已經想喊...佢走左出去班房...

佢跑呀跑...撞到一個人...正想鬧人個陣...見到佢...覺得佢幾靚仔...

X:你無事呀?

敏:冇...

X:你叫咩名呀?我叫歐俊強...

敏:我叫李思敏..

強:你搞咩呀?我撞到你一下炸WO...咁就想喊...

敏:都唔關你事....我只係遇到一個超超超超爆爆爆爆爆爆勁勁勁勁乞人憎既人啫...

強:下...咁誇...你而家去邊呀?唔洗上堂呀?

敏:唔想上呀...

強:你咩班呀?我3D

敏:你講真架?我都係呀...

強:唔想上就唔好上啦...我地去玩啦...

敏:得唔得架?

敏從來都冇試過咁...有D驚...

強:有咩事...我橕住你...

敏:咁呀...

強已經捉住敏隻手...跑入課室攡書包

入到班房....人人都望住佢地兩個拖手...發出D WOW WOW既聲...

拰完書包...佢地就即刻走...琳+澄問敏野...敏都聽唔到...

2007-9-28 05:41 PM `傻SIU欣;-
CH.3 走堂


而俊(坐係敏隔離個男仔)對呢個叫敏既女仔...冇咩感覺...只係覺得佢扮可愛...

敏:你帶我去邊到架?

強:好多小朋友都鍾意去既地方...

敏:下....

原楚強想帶敏去海洋公園....

敏自從10歲之後就冇去過海洋公園...而家去到...覺得好驚喜...

強:行啦...一定會好開心既...

敏佢地玩左好多機動遊戲...敏玩跳樓個陣...強就係下面幫敏影相...

敏落到去睇番D相...即刻"X"左D相...因為好影到佢好醜..

佢地又去左睇盈盈,樂樂...總之就玩得好開心...

玩到6黠個陣...佢地終於捨得走...

強:點呀?玩得開唔開心呀?

敏:開心...開心...好開心...

強:開心就得啦....

敏:咁我地而家去邊呀?

強:去睇戲...食飯...

敏:好呀...除左DADDY,MUMMY,琳琳,澄澄之外....就得你一個對我咁好...多謝你呀...

強:要以身相許架...]

敏:好.....難...(笑)

之後佢地就去左睇戲..食飯..

番到屋企...敏已經好攰...點知..琳,澄仲纏住佢...

琳:你今日做咩走堂呀>?

澄:今日個男仔叫咩名呀?你溝到佢呀?

琳:你唔好嘈住啦...我問緊野呀...

澄:喂...好似係我問先....

敏:喂....你地一次過問咁多野...點答

澄:係咪衰啦你...凌海琳...]

敏:好啦好啦...我去左海洋公園...個男仔叫歐俊強...

     佢冇溝我...我冇溝佢...我唔係同佢拍拖...我同佢識左一日都未夠...

     我好攰呀...聽日再講啦...

敏就去左沖涼訓啦....

2007-9-29 06:16 PM `傻SIU欣;-
ch.4 冇啦...我既初吻冇啦


敏一番到學校...就將佢同俊個張台隔到無雷公咁完...

因為敏好憎佢...佢未試過咁憎一個人...

敏個心入面....憎恨...

俊一番到黎...見到佢地兩個將台分開左...

感覺上覺得呢個女仔好好玩...

俊呀..俊呀..你仲咩咁快對人改觀呀?

俊:做咩姐...好憎我呀?

俊從來都冇試過咁撩女仔...

敏冇理佢...心入面:白痴仔...仲使問既...

俊諗:哎呀~扮coo添....

俊:喂...做咩唔采人姐...

敏:你好煩呀...我點解要l采你姐...

俊:喂..靚妹...好串wo..

敏:對你咪係囉...

俊好鬼嬲...佢突然諗左樣衰野...

俊錫敏....敏超驚...佢d眼淚又標出黎...

敏諗:冇啦..我既初吻冇啦...仲要比左個衰人..

俊:你唔係呀?錫一錫都喊...

敏仲喊得勁左...

俊:你唔好話比我知呢個係你初吻?

敏成個跪左係地下到...

俊:唔好喊啦...sor...我唔知...

俊好內疚...

強走埋黎...

強:咩事呀?唔好喊啦...敏...(佢攬住敏)

敏覺得好有安全感...

俊講晒件事比佢聽...

強:傻女黎既...

敏:咁呢個係我初吻黎架ma.....(仲喊緊)

強:比左佢都唔錯呀...佢係好仔黎架...

敏:我唔覺..佢係衰人...

呢個時候...雯用d仇恨既目光望住敏...

雯:你竟然搶走呀俊?.....你唔會有好日子過

俊:家下我好失禮你咩/?

敏:少少咁啦...

俊:仲識串人...即係冇事啦...

敏覺得佢比強攬住個一刻...好有安全感...

好溫暖....

........待

2007-9-29 06:18 PM `傻SIU欣;-
ch.5 比人打既感覺唔好受


上集略略提過既雯...終於有搞作...

佢叫埋風d馬去打敏....

敏行番屋企個陣....

敏:咩事呀?(佢比人拉左係一條後行到...)

x:雯姐,係咪佢?

雯:係呀...唔該晒...

敏:你係邊個?你做咩捉我黎呢到?

雯:你連我都唔識...點係學校生活...

敏:我唔理你係邊個..咁你捉我黎呢到做咩呀?(驚ing)

雯:冇咩野...想警告你...唔好諗住搶走俊...佢係我架...

敏:你冇野呀ma?我搶走佢?

雯打左佢一巴...

雯:醒定d....(轉身走)

敏諗:關我咩事呀?點解要打我wo...我咁大個都未比人打過架..(喊)

風:靚女...做咩係到喊?

敏:風....我...都係冇野啦...(走)

風:喂...你冇野呀ma...

敏:冇野啦...拜拜

敏走左去...風覺得佢好莫名其妙...

敏喊得好勁...冇意欲停..

敏番到屋企...即刻扮番開心...佢唔想澄同琳擔心佢..

點知...第2日...

一番到學校...

俊就同佢d靚諗住打敏...

因為雯同佢講話敏打左佢一巴...俊信晒佢..

俊不嬲都當雯係妹妹...所以幫佢出頭...但雯就以為俊鍾意佢..

敏比人打到飛起...

俊:下次唔好撩事鬧非,,,

敏已經唔想再講野...唔知點解...佢琴日比雯打...

都冇咁hurt...但係比俊打...佢就好hurt...

敏走左上天台...

佢好想知道佢做錯d咩?佢點解要比人打...

佢係天台到訓著左...

醒番個陣...已經係lunch time...

俊係班房到...冇出到去..

敏一番到去...佢就怒脾佢...

敏都冇出聲...個樣超唔開心...隻眼好紅..

俊覺得好唔開心...唔知點解...佢好似感受到佢份唔開心咁...

俊:你冇事呀ma?(溫柔...怒氣冇晒)

敏覺得佢好得人驚...佢今朝早個陣先打完佢...

個樣超恐怖...但係而家就好溫柔...

敏冇理到佢...

俊:你冇野ma?(佢抓全佢隻手)

敏:走開呀...(超超超超大聲)

俊估唔到佢有咁大反應...

強佢走左入黎...

強見到敏果個咁驚既樣...就攬住佢...

同佢走左出去...

課室得番俊一個...佢見到強攬住敏個陣...

個心唔識形容...

敏好唔開心...佢覺得比人打既感覺唔好受...尤其係比俊打.....

2007-10-4 05:09 PM `傻SIU欣;-
ch.6 sorry...原諒我!


風:你地有冇搞錯..果個雯嗌你地你點人相..你就去...佢係大佬定我係大佬呀?

x:sor...風哥...

風:仲要傷到人..你點知人地咁多野...

x:咁...

風:咁咁咁...咁你以後跟佢啦...

x:好對唔住...

風同佢條靚去左敏個到...

x:sor呀...

風:咩叫sor呀...sorry呀...嗱...如果人地唔原諒你你就唔好跟我

x:sorry...

敏:算啦...你都冇份打我...

敏又行開左....敏呢排心事重重...唔知點解..

俊知道佢打錯人之後...就好想同佢講sorry...可惜一直都冇機會

.........班房......

俊:敏...我...對唔住呀..我知道...我..

敏佢寫左一張字仔比佢...

" 傷口撕裂後...再說要補救...有用嗎? ''

俊:我都同你講sorry啦...你仲想點?

又傅一張字條..." 我只係想我地保持番距離..冇必要唔好講野 "

俊:你諗住一世都唔同我講野?

敏點頭...

俊一股氣湧上心頭..佢就再冇出聲啦...

佢唔知道點解敏會企得咁硬,,,於是佢就問雯..

俊:雯..究竟你同敏有咩恩怨?

雯:我都唔知我得罪左佢d咩...佢打我...(扮可憐)

俊:你冇呃我?

雯:你信果個賤人都唔信我?

俊:你小心d講野..佢唔係賤人...以你既性格..你都會比人蝦?

雯:你飲左佢d迷湯呀?

俊冇出聲...

雯:係呀...係我屈佢呀...唔比咩?

俊:你....(兜打打落佢到)

作者的話:好好好...打得好...抵佢死...

雯跪左落地下到...佢估唔到佢同俊感情會比一個咁既女仔搞到咁...

其實一直都係佢一廂情願...俊都冇話過佢鍾意佢...

佢d怒氣直線上升...佢話既...有敏就就冇佢

作者的話;冇左你就好啦...拍手中

俊走去捉住敏隻手...一口氣跑左上天台...

敏:你捉我上黎做咩呀?你唔係想...喇..我嗌架

俊:你終於肯同我講野喇咩?(覺得佢好可愛)

敏:我唔想架....我費事果個雯又話我搶走你...跟住又打我...然後又要比你打..

    你都係陪下你條女啦...唔係佢又周圍發顛打人...

俊知道佢真係好過份...因為敏係因為佢先比雯打..

但係之後佢又打敏...

俊跪左落地下....

俊:sorry...

敏比佢嚇親...

敏:喂,,,你起身先啦...唉..我原諒你啦...得未?


伋開心到成個彈起...錫左敏一啖...之後就走番落去..

敏呆呆咁企係原地...發自內心咁甜絲絲地笑....


記住...密切留意下一集..." 呷醋 "

2007-10-4 05:10 PM `傻SIU欣;-
ch.7 呷醋


俊同敏經過呢件事之後仲fd左添...去邊都一齊..除左去toliet...

俊想約敏食飯...

俊:今日一齊食飯呀...

敏:唔得呀...我約左人...

俊:咪推左佢囉...

敏:咁我應承左人地呀ma

俊:你只可以陪我...(嬲嬲地)

敏:點解呀?

俊:因為......我好似鍾意左你(超細聲)

敏:咩呀?講咩呀...

俊:因為你同我kiss過囉...同我kiss過既女仔淨係得你一個炸...

    所以你係我既...你要陪我...

敏:采你都傻呀...(好可愛咁笑)

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學校門口....

敏係到等緊強...

俊係佢後面睇下佢約左邊個...

強出左黎...敏就同佢一齊行...

俊走左上去...撓住敏隻手...

敏:你做咩呀?(面紅)

俊同強都覺得佢好得意...

俊:我都話左你係我架啦/...你要陪我...(好似細路)

敏忍唔住笑...

敏:唔得呀...我約左佢...下次先啦,...

俊:唔得...一齊去呀...

佢地兩個未應承...俊就撓住敏隻手行左去...

強見到佢地兩個一路上打情罵悄..有d唔開心..

俊:哇...乜食沙拉咁健康呀....減肥

敏嬲嬲地...

敏:xx俊.......

佢地就係吵吵鬧鬧咁食完一個晏...

番到學校...有件超超超驚天動地既事...

miss:今個禮拜6學校有個舞會...請各位同學盛裝出席...

       你地仲可以跳舞添...

男a:係咪同女仔跳先?

miss:各位女同學...對唔住...係

d男仔:yeah...

d女仔:頂...

俊諗:我一定要請到敏跳舞...

小息既時候...超多男仔走埋黎請敏係個日同佢地跳舞...

俊唔知點解無名火起....

俊走埋黎錫呀敏

男a:妖...人地名花有主既....

男b:係囉....仲想約佢添...

敏:你做咩呀?(面紅)

俊:你面紅個樣好可愛...我就係鍾意你可愛既樣...

敏塊面仲紅過岩岩...

敏(佢咩意思呀....搞到我個心卜卜跳)

俊(哇....點解每次錫佢都咁有feel既...)

敏+俊(我好似....鍾意左佢)

請留意下一集.ch.8 灰姑娘與兩個王子

點解好似冇咩人sup咁既...請各位sup下我

2007-10-4 05:11 PM `傻SIU欣;-
ch.8 灰姑娘與兩位王子


敏:琳琳...澄澄...你地兩個將我扮到似咩呀?

琳:哇...你睇下幾靚...


澄:係囉...幾靚...

敏上到鏡前面照一照...佢好似成個灰姑娘咁...好靚..

敏:乜呢個真係我黎架?

呢個時侯,琳同澄就行出黎...佢地兩個扮白雪公主...都幾cute呀....

佢地就咁番學校個晚會...佢地3個一入到去...個個都望住佢地3個...

男a:哇...好靚呀...我就話中間(敏)果個最靚..

男b:我就話左邊(琳)果個最靚

俊一見到敏行入黎...就想請佢跳舞...點知雯走出黎...

雯:不如你同我...

俊:我唔得閒呀...係咁啦...

俊想搵敏...但係敏已經唔見左....

強:may i...(向住敏)

敏諗住應承既時候...俊及時走到過黎...

俊:may i

敏望住兩個王子...唔知點選擇....佢...

突然之間...全場黑晒...黑到咩都睇唔到...有人將敏位開...

司儀:請各位去搵你地既parier啦...

敏咩都睇唔到...佢搵黎搵去....突然前面有個人將佢擋住..

係邊個呢?係....

敏:你係邊個...

強:敏...係咪你呀...

敏聽到強把聲...有d失望....

全場既燈開番...

司儀:let's dance

敏見到俊同雯一齊...好唔開心....

呢個時候...敏見到琳同緊一個男仔好開心咁dance...

果個男仔係耀....佢就好啦...同到佢鍾意既人一齊...

澄呢?澄同呀風dance緊...唉...敏佢覺得佢地好好采...

強:may i

敏:唔好意思...我有d唔舒服呀...我番屋企先啦...

強:...下...使唔使送你..?

敏:唔使...88(轉身)

強望住佢...俊都望佢走...佢推開雯...追左出去...

俊:敏...

敏:俊!你,,,你點解係到既?(驚喜)

俊:我黎搵你dance...

敏:你唔係同雯dance咩...(呷醋)

俊:e...有人呷醋....

敏:邊...邊有wo...我...只...不...過...奇...怪..姐...(口吃+怕醜)

俊:係呀...?

敏:係呀....唔係你以為咩呀...

俊:may i

敏:下...係呢到?

俊:55....你驚咩姐...黎啦

敏同俊就係到篇篇起舞...一個王子...一個公主...好夾...

同時...妒忌既眼光都望住佢地


下一集...ch.9..保護你係我ge職責...記住睇啦...

請大家留d cm比我啦

2007-10-5 07:55 PM `傻SIU欣;-
ch.9 保護你係我ge職責


星期6個晚佢地玩得好開心....

星期一番到學校...點解d氣芬咁奇怪?

周圍既人都好靜....

敏:咩事呀...點解...d人唔出聲既...發生咩事呀?

琳:你唔知咩?俊同隔離學校個大佬打交呀...係我地學校添...

敏:下...咁誇...知唔知為左咩呀?

琳:咁就唔知啦...

突然...有一個勁有大佬款既人走出黎....都幾靚仔...

俊走埋去敏個到...

敏:你唔好打交啦...我驚你有事....(緊張)

俊:你緊張我呀?(開心)

敏:........咪玩啦...我真係驚你有事.....

俊:唔使驚..我一定會贏...(勝利既笑+轉身)

敏諗左一陣....就大嗌:加油呀...一定要贏

佢講得好大聲...隔離d人都望住佢...呀大佬都係...

大佬:呢個女仔都幾靚wo...可惜呀...做左人地條女

大佬諗諗下....佢有個主意.....

佢突然間又話唔打....仲走埋...

俊:縮沙王...敏...行囉..上課室

敏:哦...(個心有d不詳預感)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

放學個陣....

敏自己一個行番屋企...

突然...有人行出黎....

敏:你做咩呀?你咪係今日果個...

彥:我叫呀彥...做我條女呀?

敏:下...你咁直接既....我唔可做你條女

彥:點解...因為果個呀俊?佢跟本配你唔起,.,,

敏:唔關你呀...你叫我做你條女..係因為鍾意我呀?唔係呀ma>..拜拜

彥佢捉住敏隻手...

彥:我係認真架...

敏:我要走啦...拜...

彥唔比佢走..俊佢走出黎打左彥一下...

俊:你唔好再煩住佢...

彥又打番佢一下...正確黎講..佢地係到打架...

敏:停手啦...俊我地行...

敏拉左俊走....

俊:點呀...你岩岩冇事呀ma?

敏:我點會有事呀...你有冇事呀?我好驚你整親..

俊:唔會...就算整到..我都要保護你..因為保護你係我既職責...

敏:.........我.....

俊:行啦...傻妹...

敏:做咩嗌人傻好wo..我叫敏呀!

俊:行啦...傻好敏...

敏:衰人俊....

就係咁..呢幾日就過左啦...

2007-10-5 07:56 PM `傻SIU欣;-
ch.10 因為我鍾意左你


敏同強又約左去食飯...今次俊就冇去到...

強:敏...其實我鍾意左你好耐...由一見到你開始我就好鍾意...

敏:強呀...我..對唔住呀..我..

強:得啦...明既...你唔鍾意我呀ma..其實我都知既...

敏:我地仲有冇fd做...

強:我不嬲都係你既FD...

敏:多謝你...(笑)

強:感情呢d野唔可以隔硬黎...

番到學校...

俊:敏..你岩岩同呀強食飯呀?(唔高興_)

敏:係呀...

俊:咁你..地.....傾左d咩?

敏:佢話...佢...

俊:佢講咩呀?講啦...(惡)

敏:他咁鬼惡...唔鍾意講比你聽呀....何況你做咩咁8掛呀...

俊:因為...因為我鍾意左你...真係架..我對你係認真架...

敏:....我都鍾意.......你...

俊:好野....咁你係咪即係做我條女?

敏:@@@@@@@@@@@@.....係掛

俊:咁佢同你講咩呀?

敏:而家講咩都唔重要...

佢地放學去左睇戲..

俊:敏呀,,,呢到咁凍呀...著我件3

敏:咁你咪凍囉...

俊:我話過架..保護你係我既職責...

敏好感動咁笑笑...

佢地又去左聽海浪聲...

敏:肚餓呀...去買d野食呀...

俊:好呀...你係到等我..唔好行開..

敏坐係到靜靜咁聽聽海..

x:妹妹仔...一個人呀

r:等哥哥陪下你...

敏好驚...驚到唔夠膽出聲...

w:你寂寞呀...等我安" 慰 "下你


敏:唔.............................................使.........................唔該...

w:下....愈係話唔使...就愈係要...

俊及時番到黎...

俊:邊個搞我條女....(超超超惡)

x:冇...玩下姐...

w:走啦...

俊:你仲咩理d人呀...你唔出聲佢咪唔理你囉...下...你知唔知我擔心你既...

    你有咩事我點算呀?

雖然係咁鬧敏..但係敏好開心...因為佢feel到...俊好緊佢..

敏笑...

俊:你仲笑...

敏:對唔住呀...我下次唔會架啦..

俊:哼...

敏唔好嬲啦...最多我錫錫...

俊:你話架...

敏錫左佢一啖...

俊:好啦...原諒你...

敏:點解你....

俊:因為我根好好好好好鍾意你...



下一集...ch.11 思表妹強勢回歸


請大家留d cm比我呀...thanks

2007-10-6 03:12 PM ShIrLeY
我要睇牙!!! 十卜!

2007-10-6 04:07 PM `傻SIU欣;-
ch.11 思表妹強勢回歸


俊:咩話...表妹番黎?

俊媽:我之前同你講過啦..係你唔係點上心...

俊:佢番黎做咩呀?

俊媽:你今日要接佢機呀...4點鍾去到機場喇,,,

俊:喂...我連佢咩樣都唔知...

俊媽:舉牌囉

俊:頂...舉牌呾樣衰

俊媽:詳情我寫左落告示板到...係咁啦...88]]

俊:5..bye

(一生不愛別人...只愛你)俊電話響

俊:喂...敏呀...

敏:55...今日我地去邊呀...

俊:仇日我唔得呀..我要去接表妹機呀...

敏:哦...咁算啦..

俊:咁好啦...88

敏:88

4點機場

俊係到舉牌

有一個幾靚女既女仔行左埋黎

女:俊表哥...好耐冇見喇...

俊:你係思表妹?

思:係呀...好掛住你呀...(撓住俊隻手)

俊:係呀...(fing開佢隻手)

思:俊表哥...你變左...

俊:下....]

思:你以前好錫我架..仲話...大個會娶我添...

俊:細細個唔識野姐....我地番屋企先啦

屋企...

思:姨媽...好耐冇見啦

俊媽:係呀...哇...思思大個女左..靚左好多...

思:你唔好讚我啦...

俊媽趁俊上左房...就話...

俊媽:黠呀...俊表哥對你點呀.

思:好冷淡呀..唉

俊媽:可能係同你未熟姐...你比d心出黎同佢聯繫下感情...

       你知啦...你遲d要同俊結婚

俊同思係好細個已經有婚約...俊媽亦都好鍾意思...只係俊唔知

點知比俊聽到....

俊:我係唔會娶佢...

俊媽:你知唔知自己係到講緊咩?(惡)

俊:我知...亦好清楚...我係唔會娶佢...

俊媽:我唔理...第時你一定要娶佢...因為你地早有婚約

俊:個d所謂既婚約只係你地呢d自私自利既大人訂落黎架炸

俊媽:衰仔...你幾時變到咁...

思:我出一出去(想喊)

俊媽:你去搵下佢啦...思佢人生路不熟

俊追左出去...

俊:思...做咩姐...

思:俊表哥...你唔要我...你唔娶我

俊:對唔住呀...我已經有女朋友....我認定左佢係我結婚對像

思:思思都好鍾意你架...

俊:俊表哥知...

思:我會你個女朋友公平競爭

俊:但係我最後都會揀佢...

思係到喊...

俊攬住佢....

俊:乖啦...唔好喊啦...

敏同琳咁岩係到經過..

琳:e...果個咪呀俊..佢攬住個女仔...

敏:唔會既...

敏一睇..果個真係呀俊...

敏:呱...果個係佢表妹..

琳:表妹會咁親密咩?

敏:..........

俊佢發現到敏望住佢...即刻推開思...搵敏解釋


下一集ch.12 信我...我愛你

2007-10-6 04:07 PM `傻SIU欣;-
ch.12 信我...我愛你


敏係咁係到跑...可能琳講得岩...表妹會咁親密...

俊亦都知道自己做錯左啦...佢跑去搵敏...

思呆呆咁企係原地...佢唔知發生咩事...更加唔相信表哥會番低佢一個係到...

敏跑到攰攰地...就企左係到...

彥:hi...

敏:hi...(喊緊)

彥:發生咩事呀?個衰仔俊對你唔好...

敏:唔使理我...

彥:我點可以唔理你呀...你而家咁既樣...(捉住佢隻手)

敏:我自己搞得掂架啦(fing開佢隻手)

彥:聽我講...我會比佢愛你多一萬倍...(捉住佢既博頭)

敏:sor..

俊見到彥捉住敏...就打佢...

敏:你做咩打人...

俊:你究竟鬧我...

敏:我唔想同你講任何野...(轉身走)

俊追住佢...

俊:敏,你聽我講...佢係我表妹...我攬住佢係因為佢喊緊..

    佢喊係因為我話第時唔會娶佢...我話我已經認定你係我

    既結婚對象...信我...我愛你...

敏開始停低腳步...聽佢講野...

俊:我淨係會鍾意果個比我搶走左初吻...跟住係到喊既女仔..

    我鍾意佢夠可愛...佢比人讚個陣塊面會紅...我鍾意佢

    會同我鬥咀...咩野都唔讓我既佢...我愛佢個人夠真...

    我愛佢因為我愛佢...永遠都係...我知道我成日都傷左佢既心...

    但係我確實係好愛佢...就算我第時死左...我都希望我會停留係佢身

    邊保護佢...愛你...只要佢笑..我就會好開心...信我...我愛你...

敏一路聽一路喊...佢相信俊講既野係真既...

敏跑過攬住俊...

敏:俊...我愛你...

俊:傻妹...唔好喊...我要你成為全世界最開心既女仔...

敏:.....(喊得好勁)

俊同敏印乾d眼淚...

思睇到晒...係佢印象中果個好cool果個俊表哥...係唔會咁去追一個女仔...

更加唔會講一d咁感動既樣去哄一個女仔...佢估俊一定係好鍾意呢個叫敏既女仔...

但係佢都好鍾意俊表哥..佢想搶番佢番黎...

彥都好hurt...佢知道俊係好鍾意敏..敏都係好鍾意俊..

佢地兩個攬左好耐...

但係俊冇提過佢同思有婚約個單野...佢驚敏聽左之後會揀放棄佢...

佢地去左沙灘到...欣賞呢個好靚既夜晚...

呢一刻..佢地兩個都覺得好幸福...

俊:敏...如果有一日...我變成左一隻蝴蝶...你仲會唔會認得我...

敏:如果係你既話...我一定認得....因為有你既地方...就會有d野感應住我...

俊:敏....

敏:做咩姐..咁我講真架...

俊:無論我地發生咩事...第時都要一齊...永生永世都唔好分開...

敏好大力咁點頭...

佢地今晚兩個都冇番屋企....



我覺得呢一集都幾感人...

下一集 ch.13 婚約

2007-10-9 07:49 PM `傻SIU欣;-
ch.13 婚約上


俊:訂婚?冇可能...

俊媽:你一定要同佢結婚....你地兩個早有婚約...

俊:我唔怕同你講...我有女朋友架啦...

俊媽:你而家仲細...你遲d就會同佢分開架啦...

俊:我地係唔會分開架...你嗌思死左條心佢啦..

俊媽:我唔理..總之你地兩個21歲就要結婚...

俊:你好煩呀...

思睇住呢個好cool既表哥...平時都唔多野講...點解佢今日會為左呢個

叫敏既女仔同姨媽大吵一場?佢唔明...點解表哥為佢付出咁多....

思覺得敏配唔起俊表哥...佢想搶俊表哥番黎....

第2日早上...

思同俊一齊番學....一入到學校..

人人都被思既美貌吸引住...男既鍾意...女既羨慕...

思好似好唔習慣呢種眼光....

班房

miss:今日有個新同學...

全班:男定女先?

miss:女...

男:wow...唔知靚唔靚?

思行入去...

人人都靜晒...因為已經比佢個樣吸引住...

男a:我一定要溝佢...

男b:佢做我女朋友就好啦

miss:xx思...你坐係俊同學隔離啦

俊:咁敏坐邊呀?

miss:佢坐耀隔離啦...

俊:下..咁點解唔可以調思坐耀隔離..

敏:算啦...唔緊要啦...我調...

俊:唔好啦...

敏:乖啦....

成班:wow...你地兩個...

敏塊面紅晒...

俊:咩姐...拍拖咪拍拖囉...唔比呀..

思好似好難為情咁...

耀:呀嫂...早晨呀...

敏:衰仔...玩野...

耀:你地點解會一齊既?

敏:咁佢同我示愛...我又鍾意佢...咪同佢一齊囉...

耀:wow...

敏:咁你呢?有冇拍拖呀?(幫琳收料)

耀:我冇呀...鍾意既人就有一個...

敏:係邊個呀???講啦..

耀:......係...琳...

敏笑得超勁...俊見到佢同第2個男仔玩得咁開心...有d唔高興

耀:你笑咩姐...

敏:你點解鍾意佢...?(仲笑緊)

耀:我上一次同佢跳舞個陣...就鍾意左佢...

敏:咁你一定要同佢示愛...

耀:點....解

敏:因為佢都鍾意你...

耀係到笑//...

小息...

思:敏..我想同你傾兩句...

敏:好呀...

思:我唔想你抱咁大期望係俊到...

敏:下..]

思:因為我同佢早就有婚約係身...我地一到左21歲...就會結婚..



下一集ch.14 婚約下

2007-10-9 07:50 PM `傻SIU欣;-
ch.14 婚約下


敏:你講咩呀?你講多一次...

思:接受現實啦...對唔住..

敏:咪住...俊佢知唔知你同佢有婚約?

思:知...(走)

敏個心入面有好多疑惑...佢唔知俊係咪玩佢...

咁俊之前同佢講果d甜言蜜語呢?唔通全部都係虛構?

敏佢跑走左...跑左去海邊...

又諗番起俊之前同佢既回憶...

喊喊喊...除左喊...敏就唔知可以做咩...

敏開手機...諗住打比琳同澄報平安...

點知...有31個未接來電...俊俊俊俊俊俊俊俊俊俊俊俊俊...

全部都係俊打黎...

敏打番比俊...

俊:你去左邊到呀...你冇事呀ma..做咩笠聲唔出就走左去呀?

敏:你出黎海邊呀...我有野搵你...

俊:哦...好呀..一間見

冇幾耐..俊就黎到...

俊見到敏塊面上面有兩條清晰既淚痕...用埋紅腫既眼...就知佢喊過..

俊:你做咩喊呀?(攬住敏)

敏推開佢...

俊:發生咩事呀?

敏:你同思係咪有婚約?

俊:.......

敏:咁即係你知啦....你做咩呃我呀?

俊:我呃你係因為我愛你...

敏:我唔會再信你...

俊:敏...你聽我講...我同佢既婚約係系我地好細個果陣定落架...

    我同佢 0 感情...

敏:真係既?

俊:真架...我只係鍾意你...

敏:.......嗯...我信你....

俊:唔好亂諗野...我一定會同佢取消婚約...

敏:唔...




呢集短左少少
下一集...ch.15 同我一齊...我會比到幸福你

2007-10-9 07:51 PM `傻SIU欣;-
ch.15 同我一齊...我會比到幸福你


思同雯做左好朋友...因為佢地有共同既敵人..----敏

雯將思同俊有婚約係身呢件事唱左出去...想敏知難而退...

澄:琳琳呀...敏敏呢排好似心事重重咁既...

琳:可能係因為俊同思有左婚約呱....難怪佢會咁既...

    如果耀耀同第2個女仔有左婚約...而且21歲就要果個人結婚...我都會咁...

澄:你同耀一齊啦?

琳:係呀...佢同我示愛架...

澄:你就好啦...風身邊咁多女...點會睇得上我...

琳:比d心機啦...

呢一邊....強同敏傾緊計...

強:你呢排好似冇咩精神咁既?

敏:係咩?唔夠訓呱...

強:唔好咁啦...我相信俊係鍾意你既...

敏冇出聲....原來佢已經係到喊緊...

強:唔好喊啦....佢值得你為佢喊咩?

敏:..............

強:你同我一齊呀...我會比到幸福你架...

敏依然冇講到野...強攬住佢...

雯同思影左強攬住佢果張相...

雯:搞掂....

放學............

俊:李思敏...你係咪同左強一齊?

敏:你講咩呀...

俊:你自己睇下...

敏:你鍾意話我係咪係囉...橫豎你遲d都要同你表妹結婚架啦...

    我地都唔一齊得耐....

俊:你唔信我...我會同佢取消婚約架...

敏:係咩?

俊:你當然想我唔係啦...咁你就可以同強一齊...

敏:至少佢真係會錫我...你呢?你淨係搞到我唔開心....

俊:咁你咪同佢一齊囉...滿意未呀?分手囉...

敏:你話架...謝子俊...

俊:我話咪我話囉....

敏轉身走左去...佢唔知自己跑左去邊到...佢淨係知道佢d眼淚忍唔住啦...

俊企係原地...留出兩行眼淚...一直係到睇戲既敏同思都估唔到俊會喊....

思跑上去攬住俊....

思:俊表哥...佢唔愛你...仲有好多人鍾意你架...

俊:你行開呀...

思:俊表哥...

俊:你走開呀!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(超大聲)

思都忍唔住喊...佢做咁多野..都博唔到俊既歡心...

第2日....

琳+澄:起身啦...

敏:我唔番啦....我唔舒服呀 呀...

琳:咁呀...

敏:咁你地番學先啦...我訓下...你同我去請假...

澄:咁好啦..88

琳同澄出左門口....敏就起左身...

其實敏咩事都冇...琳+澄都知...不過由佢...

敏唔想面對俊...佢知道俊同佢gameover

俊:琳...點解思敏冇番學?

琳:唔知呢可...(唔想講比佢知)

俊:請你講比我知...我知錯架啦...

琳:算啦...謝子俊...而家知錯已經太遲...

澄:你跟本就係玩思敏...你唔好再煩佢啦...

俊:我唔係...我真係愛佢...

琳:愛佢既話就唔會屈佢啦...

俊:你話...我怪錯左佢...

強走埋黎...

強:梗係啦...佢個陣好唔開心...係到喊緊..我只不過係安慰佢炸...

    你知唔知你好好采...你可以同敏一齊...我呢?我鍾意佢又點?

    直到琴日..我向佢第2度示愛..佢依然無動於衷...因為佢鍾意你呀...

    佢唔想你夾係思同佢之間...佢唔想咁痛苦炸...佢為你付出咁多...

    你呢?你就係識得怪佢...我覺得你比唔到幸福佢...

俊:我....

琳:你如果仲係愛佢既話...就追番佢番啦...

俊呆呆咁企係到...佢知道...佢做錯左...

2007-10-12 04:33 PM `傻SIU欣;-
ch.16 比一次機會我


俊連堂都唔上...就跑去搵敏...其實佢係好好好好好愛敏架...

呢一邊既敏...佢已經起左身..正諗住去食早餐./

點知...呀俊係到拍門...

敏:你點解係到架?你唔使番學?

俊:番學唔夠你重要...我想講...

敏:你想講咩都好..我唔想聽...(閂門)

俊:我唔理你想唔想聽...我都要講...

敏:你鍾意講就講...(閂門)

俊伋隔住門係到講..

俊:敏,對唔住...我知道我又做錯事...我成日都令你唔開心...

    我知我冇資格去同你一齊...但係我都想去愛你..保護你...

    令你開心...令你快樂...因為見到你笑...我就會開心...

     我唔想你再為我喊...比多一次機會我...信我...我係

     因為緊張你先會誤會你...我愛你...我好愛好愛你...

敏係呢邊已經喊到成個人跪左落地..

敏:太遲 LU...(開門+喊)

俊:唔會架...我知我地大家都愛大家...

敏:我已經應承左媽咪..去美國同佢定居...

俊:咁你推左佢...

敏:DADDY...MUMMY幫我安排好晒...機票我都拎到手...下個禮拜就起飛...

俊:你...你唔可以走...因為我好想同你渡過每一段日子..

敏:對唔住...我諗我地早D分手好過啦...你遲D都要同思...

俊唔理咁多,,,已經錫左落敏到...佢地兩個唔想停止呢場接吻戲..

敏:你走啦...

俊:我地好好一齊埋呢一個禮拜呀...我愛你

敏點頭...呢種又得又失既感覺令呢一對小戀人都好苦惱...

晚上8點...屋企..

琳+澄:咩話..你要去美國?

敏:係呀..我已經應承左媽咪...

琳:點..點解咁突然?

敏:佢地幫我安排好晒D野...下個禮拜一就飛...

澄:咁你捨得謝子俊?

敏:唔捨得架...又點?

琳:咁你就唔好去啦...

敏:佢同思遲早都要結婚...我知道佢係好鍾意我..但係我地始終要分開...

澄:唔好諗咁多...

琳:咁你取消左學位未呀?

敏:未呀...我請左3個禮拜大假炸...我遲D先搞...

澄:55...咁你聽日番唔番學?

敏:唔番...

琳+澄:咁我地聽日都0番...

琳:我叫埋耀耀...

澄:咁我叫埋風風啦...

敏:哇...做咩你地拍晒拖架?

琳+澄:HEHE

2007-10-13 02:33 PM ◇恨﹏愛◇
十卜十卜,
點解俊係都同敏唔可以好好咁拍拖,,
要比思同雯煩住唔比佢兩個拍一場好拖喎!
佢兩個咁衰衰..
因住冇天收..!''
最後,,我希望...敏同俊唔會分開-3-


                       by~杏仁餅**

2007-10-14 10:58 AM ShIrLeY
絕對認周牙`

2007-10-18 04:43 PM `傻SIU欣;-
ch.17 在香港的最後一天


琳:今日係你最後一日留係香港...我地去玩呀..

敏:好呀...

俊:咁我地去邊到玩呀?

澄:去海洋公園....

耀:下...咁低B...

風:係囉...去飛車場...

敏:去海洋公園呀...我想去呀...陪我呀...

全部:好呀...

人人都就晒敏...因為個個都知...可能第時見唔番...

海洋公園...跳樓機上

敏捉俊隻手...

敏:好驚呀...俊...呢到好高呀...

俊:唔使驚..我係你身邊...

敏:攬 住 我 呀

俊:點攬呀..傻妹..一間先攬...

敏:好呀....

過山車上

敏係到尖叫...

俊:真係咁驚?

敏:係呀....俊..我愛你呀...

俊:我永遠都愛你呀...李思敏...

敏係到笑...眼淚都出黎...

俊:傻妹..我地又唔係以後都唔見...

敏係到點頭...但係佢佑佢地唔會再見...

下晝7點...海洋公園門口...

佢地分開左一pair pair..

敏:俊呀...我想你叫一次我個名...

俊:下..點解

敏:我想我記得你叫我把聲...

俊:敏.....

敏:多謝你...

俊:聽日我諗我唔去送你機...我驚我會喊...

敏:哦...我都驚我喊...俊...你要記住我個樣

俊:你又唔係去死...

敏:點都好啦...我愛你...

俊:我知啦..我都好愛你...永遠都係...暑假我會去搵你...

敏:我而家都未飛...咁快講定做咩姐..

俊:知啦...

就係咁...佢地就過完敏係香港既最後一天...

要同香港講永別...同埋要同俊講再見...

佢地係咪就咁就分開呢????


下一集...句號

2007-10-18 04:44 PM `傻SIU欣;-
ch.18 我走了...再見


機場

琳:記住call我呀...唔好唔記得我呢個死黨...

澄:寫信比我呀....

敏:得啦...長氣...我會永遠記住你地架...

琳:敏敏...我好唔捨得你呀!(攬住敏+喊)

敏:我都好唔捨得你地呀...你唔好喊啦..你喊我又喊架啦....(忍住..冇喊到)

敏四圍望/...俊佢真係冇黎到...敏好想見佢...可惜...

呢段咁刻骨銘心既初戀...就咁就冇左...一句再見都講唔到...

敏入閣...仍然不時回頭望..佢幾咁希望俊係遲到....

但係佢冇黎到...敏同澄佢地揮揮手...就入左禁區...

一上到飛機...敏既眼淚係咁留出黎....

眼淚...已經不想停止...只好讓它繼續留...

x:小姐...隔離冇人呀ma?

呢位 x 先生係邊個?

邊個.....

佢.....

係....

..............

敏抬頭望一望....俊...

敏破涕為笑...問:俊...你點解會係到架?

俊:我陪你去美國囉...我打左電話比你媽媽...佢願意比你係香港繼續讀書...

     至於今次...我地就當去旅遊...

敏:俊..岩岩我係上機個一刻....我個心好想見到你呀..我發現...原來我真係好好好

    鍾意你...好掛住你....俊..我愛你呀...

俊:傻妹...你認為我會比你離開我咩?

敏:我以為你會放棄我...

俊:我會咩?好啦...我地一齊等飛機開...

呢個時候...佢地隻手拖埋一齊...好幸福咁捉住對方既手..

幻想住未來既日子....

2007-10-18 04:45 PM `傻SIU欣;-
ch.19 下..唔係呱...


佢地一去到美國...敏爸..敏媽就係機場等佢...

敏:Daddy..Mummy..好耐冇見啦...好掛住你地呀...

敏媽:有男朋友仔陪就得架啦你...

敏望一望俊..尷尬咁話:邊到係wo...

俊:伯母...世伯..你地好...

敏爸:大家都係自己人囉...使咩咁客氣...

敏:邊個同佢係自己人呀...爸呀...你亂講d咩呀?

俊:你恨左好耐啦....難得我肯啃你...

敏:咩wo./.邊個話肯嫁你呀...

俊:係呀....哦...

敏媽:好啦...唔好耍花搶住啦...番屋企先啦...

俊+敏:哦...

敏媽:你地休息下先啦...夜晚我地要去飲..請晒d人架啦...

敏:擺咩酒?

敏媽:預祝你地一齊姐...

敏:媽呀..你又亂講...(面紅)

俊:咁我地使唔使去買杉先啦?

敏媽:咁又唔使咁大件事...3就唔使買..你地去行下街啦..

敏:哦...咁行啦..呀俊..

食飯中...

敏:熙表哥...好耐冇見啦...

熙:係呀...好耐冇見啦...大左又靚左wo...

敏:hehe...咁識哄我...點呀..有女朋友未呀?

熙:未wo...我想擺多d時間去哄我個乖表妹呀ma..

敏:係呀...咁乖呀...

敏同熙係細細個成日都一齊玩...所以好熟...但熙對敏又有一番感覺

係佢地講得好開心既時候...俊行埋黎一齊傾...

俊:hi....敏呀...你地係到傾咩呀?

敏:冇呀閒計姐...

熙:佢係...

敏:佢叫謝子俊..係我既男朋友

熙既面色一沉...俊留意到晒佢既表情...

敏:熙表哥..做咩唔出聲呀?>

熙:太驚訝你有人溝姐....

敏:使唔使個個都窒我呀...

熙佢個心有d難講既感覺...

熙:係啦...你今次會番黎幾耐?(轉話題)

敏:3個禮拜到啦...

俊:我去一去洗手間...

熙:點解你會同埋佢番黎?你地親密到咁既?

敏:我地經歷左好多好多野先至一齊架...

回家路上

俊:敏..我話樣野比你聽呀..你千其唔好驚wo..

敏:好呀...怕你呀

俊:你個熙表哥鍾意你...

敏:下...唔係呱...

俊:係呀..佢知道你係我女朋友個陣...幾失望呀...

敏:應該唔係既...我同熙表哥由細玩到大...佢奇怪我早過佢拍拖姐...

俊:信唔信就由得你啦.有陣時...男仔既觀察力都唔錯架...

聽佢講一講...敏個心好亂...佢決定扮唔知

2007-10-26 03:10 PM 細路女`
十卜你牙>U<
個故仔好好睇-vv-

2007-10-27 07:33 AM ◇恨﹏愛◇
十卜十卜..
好睇..~~~

2007-10-27 08:02 AM ●siu_y_an§
好睇野@@v

2008-3-12 12:15 AM ◤SiU俊◢
真人真事?
你的我會嚇一跳
同我一樣名=-=

2009-3-29 03:26 PM 雪兒x永恆之戀
回覆 #18 ◇恨﹏愛◇ 的帖子

佢正一衰人~~~~~你去死啦~~俊同敏係唔會分開嫁:Q

2009-3-29 03:37 PM 雪兒x永恆之戀
[smilies]17[/smilies]爆好睇同我之前睇果個一樣呀~但係好似未完嫁喎~快d po埋佢啦~快d呀

2009-3-29 03:38 PM 雪兒x永恆之戀
呀.........應該係一樣禁好睇~~~v___________v

2009-4-3 04:36 PM natalie9069
快D  PO啦

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