五年級Journal

題目:A holiday trip

我不知道怎樣作:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(

A holiday trip呢個題目咁簡單...
一個小五學生唔可能作唔到...
佢叫得你作文...
就緊係作o野ga la...
呢個題目係a holiday trip...
咪作下係holiday做咩lo...
小4都作到La...

[quote][b]原帖由 [i]candy[/i] 於 2007/10/7 12:19 PM 發表。 [/b][url=http://forum.eyankit.com/viewthread.php?tid=7782&page=1#pid43620][img]http://forum.eyankit.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
A holiday trip呢個題目咁簡單...
一個小五學生唔可能作唔到...
佢叫得你作文...
就緊係作o野ga la...
呢個題目係a holiday trip...
咪作下係holiday做咩lo...
小4都作到La... [/quote]
好串啊你 =口=

5.........................

Holiday...
you can try to write a trip about going to Ocean Park or the Peak...(最普遍家la!)
If I were you, I'll chose Ocean Park

作下在個假期你做既活動啦,又可以話你去旅行,唔洗一定要係真野,可以係作,你又又可以作去邊道邊道玩咁lo

我唔係大你好多,我都係六年級炸~

作下o係summer hoilday....

thx~ thank:)

其實Journal寫D乜好睇自己,,,因為你只係五年級,,.老師既要求唔會大得去邊
你可以大概講講係個假期入面做過D乜,,,又或者舉出一個令你好難忘,,,好深刻既事,,,詳細咁講番出黎都得
我唔知你地既老師有冇限字數,,,即使有,,,你最好盡量唔好睇住字數睇寫,,,以免會令文章好生硬,,,或結構出現問題

[color=blue][b][size=3]P.S.我唔係D咩專業人士,,,所講既唔一定岩,,,因為(我都只係中二),,,以上內容只供參考[/size]＝＝[/b][/color]