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2011-1-2 09:05 PM hei_109
原創.... (英文)

I wake up in the morning and I start to find.
I know I need to find out something that I missed.
Oh! Where are you?
Where can I find you?
I eat lunch at afternoon and I start to find again.
I know I need to find out something that I hope.
Oh! Where are you?
How can I find you?
I put down my job and I satrt to find again.
I know I need to find out the answer that I want.
Yes! Is you. I found out you.
What answer do you want to tell?
Is it the answer that I want to listen?
"I Love You."
You told me and I start to cry.
Thank you for told me this.
This is the answer that I want to listen.
And the last word I say...
"I Miss You too."



By hei_109 (100%原創!!!)

2011-1-2 09:10 PM stephanie903
你終於上番yk...

2011-1-2 10:12 PM hei_109
回覆 #2 stephanie903 的帖子

系呀... 好耐冇[email protected]@

2011-1-2 10:44 PM PinKish
-0-'''情感太直接
講得衰d就係冇深度
不過都ok啦

2011-1-3 02:50 PM hei_109
回覆 #4 PinKish 的帖子

多謝指點~~ :P

2011-1-3 05:02 PM bb_irenekei
Hei <3
There is a typing mis. change it --> satrt on the 9th line
+ oil ... looking forward for yr reply and article ;)

2011-1-3 07:07 PM 836430603
up咩????:L:L

2011-1-4 02:05 PM hei_109
回覆 #6 bb_irenekei 的帖子

thank irenekei >3<

2011-1-4 06:06 PM bb_irenekei
回覆 #8 hei_109 的帖子

but u have not changed it yet -0-

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