入黎睇睇~要比d心機睇哂佢!!!

因為太無聊,,,

又諗唔到有咩主題,,,

所以就諗住打英文考試ge作文出黎,,,

作得好差嫁,,,

想踩就踩,,,不過唔好踩咁盡.............

好牙*v*"
歡迎``=]

先打題目..........

Follow these pictures and write the ending by yourselves,

write about at least 120 words.

內容:

Last summer holiday,my classmates,teachers and I had a camp

because we were primary six students and we were going to become

the secondary school students,so our class wanted to have a camp.

呢個係第一段,,,紅色果d字係比老師改咗ge(不過仲未有紅字住)

回覆 #3 s2011018 的帖子

有紅字嗎？- -"

回覆 #4 夏雪~ 的帖子

好快就會有,,,

喺第二段...........

講埋藍色果d未係我錯咗ge

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第二段......

We chose one of the forest in America to have the [color=Blue]camp[/color].[color=Red](camping trip)[/color]
                                                                       [color=Red]at[/color]
We booked a coach to get there.When we arrived ^ the forest, it was almost

3:00 pm.Our teachers began to teach us how to set up the tents and the sleeping bags.

When we finished [color=Blue]set[/color][color=Red]ting[/color] up the tents and the sleeping bags,it was nearly 5:30pm.

Then we began to cook the dinner and collect some woods to get the fire.

係咪好多錯字呢~!

回覆 #5 s2011018 的帖子

好過我:em49:

我諗你都系吾小心錯姐=3=

回覆 #5 s2011018 的帖子

都話你英文好嫁LA...吾系好多錯字姐
我多你好多嫁....XD

回覆 #7 eee3 的帖子

唔好屈經:(

好勁牙-v-
我小學成板都係紅色的=]
好靚=]

回覆 #11 夏雪~ 的帖子

自豪....
家姐我覺得你好自豪XD

GOOD:clown:

回覆 #11 夏雪~ 的帖子

佩服:o :o

[quote][b]原帖由 [i]-呆`h0![/i] 於 2008-7-8 16:54 發表。 [/b][url=http://forum.eyankit.com/viewthread.php?tid=22461&page=1#pid193905][img]http://forum.eyankit.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
我諗你都系吾小心錯姐=3= [/quote]

我唔知呀~~

[quote][b]原帖由 [i]H0![/i] 於 2008-7-8 16:55 發表。 [/b][url=http://forum.eyankit.com/viewthread.php?tid=22461&page=1#pid193906][img]http://forum.eyankit.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
都話你英文好嫁LA...吾系好多錯字姐
我多你好多嫁....XD [/quote]

一陣間就會好多=3=


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第三段~~

When we finished the dinner,we had a campfire,we talked

about our[color=Blue] secerts[/color][color=Red](secrets)[/color]with others.When it was almost 11:00pm,

we came back to our tents and slept.Suddenly,my friends in my tent turned

on her torch and invited us to explore the forest,and we said "yes" immediately.

We crepted out to the tent and started our adventure.

回覆 #14 s2011018 的帖子

幾好呀:)

第四段,,我認為呢段幾精彩的(唔同意ge唔好打我).....

We walked for 15 minutes,the weather got colder and colder,

it's like the movies that some unusal things were happening.

First,scary sounds of birds or animals smashed into our ears,

we felt frightened and we wanted to scream,but before we

[color=Blue]scream[/color],[color=Red](screamed)[/color] I found that there was an owl on the tree

and the scary sound [color=Blue]is[/color][color=Red](was)[/color] made by it.I also found that,

we got lost!

好多錯字呀~!

好勁呢```

回覆 #16 s2011018 的帖子

吟唔叫多

我一篇文都有超過20個錯啦..XDD

[quote][b]原帖由 [i]arwg[/i] 於 2008-7-8 17:30 發表。 [/b][url=http://forum.eyankit.com/viewthread.php?tid=22461&page=2#pid194005][img]http://forum.eyankit.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
好勁呢``` [/quote]
咁差都話勁~~
對住我要講真話架~!

[quote][b]原帖由 [i]hkpk[/i] 於 2008-7-8 17:31 發表。 [/b][url=http://forum.eyankit.com/viewthread.php?tid=22461&page=2#pid194007][img]http://forum.eyankit.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
吟唔叫多 [/quote]

一陣間多到嚇死你

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第五段...........

We didn't have any map or compass,we only [color=Blue]have[/color] [color=Red](had)[/color] a torch

that almost didn't have the energy.We walked and walked,

[color=Blue]suddeny [/color][color=Red](suddenly)[/color],a ghost appeared in front of us and screamed

at us,we were scared like we lost our heart and we screamed

together.We ran and ran,we stayed under a tree until the torch

didn't have any energy."What can we do?"Mary asked.

[[i] 本帖最後由 s2011018 於 2008-7-8 05:46 PM 編輯 [/i]]

回覆 #20 s2011018 的帖子

Gramma錯

回覆 #21 hkpk 的帖子

邊度呀??????????/

回覆 #20 s2011018 的帖子

咪講左真話囉`
講大話你就信到十足十`
講真話你就唔信我`

回覆 #23 arwg 的帖子

咁即係話你之前同我講果d嘢都係假嫁???:'( :'( :'(

可唔可以話比我聽我第五段邊度錯Grammer?????

[quote][b]原帖由 [i]s2011018[/i] 於 2008-7-8 05:44 PM 發表。 [/b][url=http://forum.eyankit.com/viewthread.php?tid=22461&page=2#pid194060][img]http://forum.eyankit.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]

咁差都話勁~~
對住我要講真話架~!



一陣間多到嚇死你

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第五段...........

We didn't have any map or  ... [/quote]
吾算好多姐-3-'!!
錯得又吾系好離譜-0-

回覆 #25 -呆`h0! 的帖子

全級考第7嘅呢位人兄,,,

可唔可以話比我聽我第五段邊到嘅Grammer錯呀???

回覆 #24 s2011018 的帖子

過去式寫左現在式

回覆 #27 hkpk 的帖子

邊句呀????????

回覆 #28 s2011018 的帖子

差唔多段段都有:L

回覆 #29 hkpk 的帖子

你話我冇轉過去式果d字前面係咪有
was,,
didn't
to嫁?????/

[quote][b]原帖由 [i]s2011018[/i] 於 2008-7-8 04:28 PM 發表。 [/b][url=http://forum.eyankit.com/viewthread.php?tid=22461&page=1#pid193826][img]http://forum.eyankit.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
先打題目..........

Follow these pictures and write the ending by yourselves,

write about at least 120 words.

內容:

Last summer holiday,my classmates,teachers and I had a camp

beca ... [/quote]
睇到Follow these就唔想睇啦:em35: