Grammar(找錯處)有冇人識呀?吾該!!

Diane is proofreading Simon's essay about role models.There is one mistake in each line.Read
the article and correct the mistakes.Underline the words that are ` ^'wrong and write the
correct words above them.Mark the position of a missing word with `a'and write the missing
word above it.Cross out any extra words with a `x'.

[China's Positive Role Models]
China should be proud of himself.In a short time,it has produced many

positive role models that give the encouragement to people worldwide.In the

world of the sports in particular,there are now many famous chinese stars.

One example is Yao Ming.He turned herself into an excellent basketball

player throught a lot of hard training.He is also a star on the television.That

is because many people in China and around the world now watch the

television just to see him play for Houston Rockets basketball team.

Another example is the Liu Xiang,the first athlete to win a gold medal for
China

in Olympic track event.When he runs in 100-metre hurdles,it is

very easy for him to jump over hurdles.That is why Chinese people

are sure he will win again in the 2008 Olympic Games in the Beijing

These athletes encourage us to take better care of myself.They also

encourage us to learn to speak and write the English.That is because they

ourselves are proof of what you can achieve if you take care of yourself and

know language of the world.

上面果d咩泥?

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上面果d咩泥? [/quote]
佢叫你係果段文字入面找錯既grammer出黎阿= =

himself?國家不是以女性的她黎講嫁咩?(唔肯定)

it should be "itself" instead of himself in the first line.

China should be proud of itself.In a short time,it has produced many

He turn himself into an excellent basketball

不用那麼多呀!:Q